作文摘要：该篇《A hammer》的作文为六年级作文，由作者“tem189”与大家一起分享，体裁为叙事作文，50字作文，请同学们仔细阅读全文，你觉得作文中哪段或哪句写的最好呢？同时，你发现哪里有错句或错别字吗？请点击这里评论吧！
Bob is a boy. Once he through a forest,And then he finds a hammer.He wants to take it to home,but suddenly,he remebers his mom tell him “ you can’t do this thing,you should look for the lose the thing person and give that person.”so he begin look for the person.he looks and looks.After two hour,he finds a man walk to him. The man is his dad,he looks very too worry.the hammer is his dad’s.he is puzzle now.what is dad use the hammer do?In the evening,he go home early.when,he is very surprise.he forget today is his birthday.now his parents and sister have a party for him,they all shout to him “Happy birthday!”he eat the birthday cake and get many gifts from his mom and sister,but his dad dong give him any gifts.the party is finish his dad give him that hammer.
And his dad say:”From this hammer,I can see you are my good son,the hammer only 0.5＄,,but I think it is the most expensive of all the things in the world,because it has a thing and in the world doesn’t have next one.”
The story is very good ,isn’t it? Well,do you want to watch this hammer,you can go America,It in New York No.3 measures museum.
北京市通州区贡院小学 六年级 李佳平
老师随机赠送作者：只要站起来比摔倒多一次，那就是成功。