初三中考英语作文10篇作文1200字

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篇一：中考英语初三作文(1)_7900字

第十八讲作文精讲（一）

姓名__________学校__________年级__________

【学习目标】 对于中考选择题型进行全面的盘点, 查漏补缺

【知识要点】

（一）掌握英语写作技巧：

（1）注意篇章结构，合理布局

开始部分（opening paragraph）——说出文中的要点、核心问题。

正文部分（Body paragraphs）——围绕主题开展叙述、讨论。

结尾部分（concluding paragraphs）——对全文的总结和概括。

要做到全文中心突出、段落之间必须是有机地联系，内容完整、连贯。前后呼应，祛除

与主题无关的内容。

（2）确定主题句

主题句是对全文的概括，是文章的主旨。它能在文章中起到“画龙点睛”的作用。通常主

题句出现在一篇文章的开头，而后，全文对主题句所提出的内容进行解释，扩展。 写主题句应注意以下几点：

①归纳出你要写的文章的几个要点

②提炼出一句具有概括性的话

③主题句应具有可读性，抓住、吸引读者。

【知识要点】

学会巧用连接词

要想使文章有整体性、连贯性，就要学会正确使用连接词

表示罗列增加

First, second, third,

First, then / next, after that / next, finally

For one thing … for another…,

On (the) one hand…on the other hand,

Besides / what’s more / in addition / furthermore / moreover / another /

also,Especially /

表示时间顺序

now, at present, recently,

after, afterwards, after that, after a while, in a few days,

at first, in the beginning, to begin with,later, next, finally,

immediately, soon, suddenly, all of a sudden, at that moment, as soon as, the

momentfrom now on, from then on,at the same time, meanwhile,

till, not…until, before, after, when, while, as during,

表示解释说明

now, in addition, for example, for instance, in this case, moreoverfurthermore, in fact,

actually

表示转折关系

but, however, while, though, or, otherwise, on the contrary, on the other

hand, in contrast, despite, in spite of, even though, except (for), instead, of

course, after all,

表示并列关系

or, and, also, too, not only … but also, as well as, both… and, either …or, neither

…nor

表示因果关系

because, because of, since, now that, as, thanks to…, due to…, therefore, as a

result (of), otherwise, so…that, such…that

表示条件关系

as (so) long as, on condition that, if, unless

表示让步关系

though, although, as, even if, even though, whether …or…, however, whoever,

whatever, whichever, wherever, whenever, no matter how (who, what, which, where, when,

whom)

表示举例

for example, for instance, such as…, take… for example

表示比较

be similar to, similarly, the same as, in contrast, compared with (to)…just like, just as, 表示目的

for this reason,, for this purpose, so that, in order to, so as to

表示强调

in deed, in fact, surely, certainly, no doubt, without any doubt, truly,

obviously, above all,

表示概括归纳

in a word, in short, in brief, on the whole, generally speaking, in my opinion, as far

as I know, As we all know, as has been stated, as I have shown, finally, at last, in summary, in conclusion

（三）掌握常用句型：

下面只列举比较常用的

1. in order to

为了实现他的梦想，他学习非常努力。

He worked very hard in order to realize his dream.

2. in order that

她拼命干活以便到六点时把一切都准备就绪。

She worked hard in order that everything would be ready by 6 o’clock..

3. so…that

他们太累了，除了伸懒腰什么都做不了了。

They were all so tired that they could do nothing but yawn.

4. such…that

天气非常冷，以致于街上一个人都没有。

It was such a cold day that there was nobody on the street.

5. would rather do…than do

他宁愿听他人讲而不愿自己说。

He would rather listen to others than talk himself.

6. prefer doing to doing

他宁愿在精心准备后去做报告。

He prefers making speeches after careful preparation.

7. prefer to do…rather than do

比起女人，男人总是宁可在家睡觉也不愿花那么多时间来购物。

Compared with women, men always prefer to sleep at home rather than spend so much time

shopping.

8. not only…but also

在短短的三年的时间里她不但完成了所有课程，而且还获得了博士学位。

In just three years, she had not only finished all the lessons, but also received her

doctor’s degree.

9. either…or

如果考试过关，你可以买一个MP3或去云南玩一趟。

You could either buy an MP3 or go to Yunnan for a visit if you pass the exam.

10. Neither…nor

他是一个无聊的人，既不爱娱乐，也不爱读书。

He is a boring man. He likes neither entertainment nor reading.

11. as well as

他善良又乐于助人。

He was kind as well as helpful.

12. …as well

这个小孩活泼又可爱。

The child is active and funny as well.

13. One…the other

你看见桌子上有两只笔吗？一支是红色的，另一支是黑色的。

Have you seen two pens on the desk? One is red, the other is black.

14. Some…others

每个人都很忙，有些在读书，有些在写作。

Everyone is busy in classroom. Some are reading, others are writing.

15. make…+adj /n

我们所做的可以让世界更美丽。

What we do will make the world more beautiful.

【经典例题】

A

写作题目-1 Knowledge or Experience

Directions： You are allowed 40 minutes to write an essay no less than 150 words on the following topic.

1.some emphasize book knowledge

2.others stress practical experience

3.which one is more important？ Give your reasons to illustrate your opinion.

范文：

Which is more important in life， knowledge from the books you read， or personal experience you gain in reality？ The answer may vary from person to person. The young， educated may emphasize the former， and the old may stress the later.

But in my opinion， they are of the same importance.

Experience is priceless. How to become an efficient secretary？ How to prepare

for your first child to come into the world？ There is so much experience we need in careers， in life and even in academic studies. It helps one deal with the problems with ease and confidence. Especially activities and to accumulate experience of different kinds is more crucial.

Experience， however， is limited in terms of time and space. For one thing， it is impossible for anyone to experience all the important events and meet all the famous people. For another， as the speed with which skills are obsolete and new problems crop up is unprecedented because of the fast development of society， experience is far less adequate. Depending too much on it only leads to narrow-mindedness and prejudice.

One way to compensate for it is to read books. Books of various kinds can bring us almost unlimited additional experience. From books you can not only trace back to the wisdom of our antecedents， but keep up with the latest developments of science and technology. To be sure， it's secondhand experience. But it is the ideal supplement to our own limited experience. Few of us can travel around the world， or live long beyond one hundred years， but all of us can live many lives by reading books.

Both book knowledge and personal experience are essential. While experience makes one more resourceful， book knowledge makes one more learned

B

中国加入 WTO 后，有一大批外国人来我市——河源参观。假设你是导游，请根据以下外宾简单介绍我市的情况。

要求： 1. 100 词左右； 2. 要点包括： a. 有悠久的历史，位于广东的东北部，离广州 198 公里，人口约 324 万。 b. 有许多名胜古迹，如苏家围（ Sujiawei ）；万绿湖（ WanluLake ）等等；万绿湖是一个很美丽的地方，湖水清澈，无污染；湖中有各种各样的鱼；你可以到那里划船，野餐，钓鱼，是度假的好去处。你也可以去参观河源市博物馆，在那里你可以看到许多恐龙化石（ fossil ）。c. 祝大家在河源玩得愉快。

Ladies and gentlemen,

Welcome to Heyuan, now let me introduce our city — Heyuan to you. Heyuan is a city with a long history. It is in the northeast of Guangdong and 198 kilometres away from Guangzhou. It has a population of 3,240,000.

There are many places of interest in Heyuan, such as Sujiawei Wanlu Lake and so on. Wanlu Lake is a beautiful place. The water is clean and not polluted. There are all

kinds of fish in it. You can go boating, go fishing and have a picnic there. It is really a good place to spend your holiday. Besides, you can go and visit Heyuan Museum. There you can see a lot of dinosaur egg fossils.

I hope you can enjoy yourselves in Heyuan.

C

Make Housework

Is it good for students

Some people think students need not do any housework.They think the

thing students need do is to study well. I don’t think so. It is good for students to do some housework for three reasons.

Firstly, to do some housework can make you independent.You can’t depend on others all your life.So,you should learn to do some housework now.

Secondly, to do some housework can keep you healthy and strong ,some hard housework can be regarded as a kind of physical exercise.

Finally, to do some housework can share your parents’work .They must be happy if you say” Have a rest ,and I will do the housework”

So I think it is good for students to do some housework.

【经典练习】

A

甲型HINI流感从电视上看到美国正流行甲型HINI流感（A/HINI flu）,部分学校停课你为你正在美国上学的笔友Mike的健康与安全担心。请立即给他写一封email询问他的情况，并给他提出防护建议。 要点： 一．询问 1.他的健康状况； 2.他们学校有无甲型HINI流感病例（A/HINI flu cases）； 3.他们是否还上学。 二．建议 1.尽量呆在家里，少去人多的地方；

2.勤洗手；讲卫生 3.多开窗，保持空气新鲜； 4.多吃水果蔬菜。

B

卫生健康饮食:健康一直是人们关注的问题我校要举行以“关爱健康”为题的主题班会,请根据下表内容谈谈你的看法,写一篇80字左右的演讲槁。 保持健康的重要性

保持健康的方法

保持健康的结论9

(你的看法?)

1.多吃水果蔬菜保持饮食平衡避免含糖高脂肪高的食物2.多锻炼健身强体;3.鄙弃不良习惯 (你的看法?)

How to stay our health /fit?

C

根据中英文提示，写出内容完整、意思连贯、符合逻辑的稿件。（字数不少于60词，英文提示词供选用）

有写学生不爱吃学校的午饭，常到校外去吃他们所喜欢吃的食物。但有些食物并不利于他们的身体健康。“英语角”打算针对这个问题展开讨论。请你准备一篇讨论稿，谈谈你的看法和建议。

参考词汇：not like, go out of school, be afraid, be back, more delicious, offer

篇二：中考英语初三 作文(2)_11500字

第十九讲 中考英语书面表达

背诵范文

一、Great changes in my hometown

More than twenty years ago, my hometown was just a small , old and poor town. Most of people were farmers. There were few factories. The people didn’t have enough food to eat and wore old clothes. They had a hard life .

Great changes have taken place in the past twenty years . The people have found a lot of ways of making money . Now there are many tall buildings . They are very beautiful . Roads are wide and clean . People can take buses or drive their own cars to go to work . Many people have cell phones and personal computers. People’s living conditions have improved a lot . Thanks to the government’s efforts . my hometown is becoming more and more beautiful .

二、Save the earth

How to protect the environment has become one of the biggest problems in the world . It’s our duty to protect our environment . No matter where we live , we should do something to keep our neighborhood clean and tidy . We can collect waste paper or other waste things for recycling. We should plant more trees and we should prevent those factories from pouring waste water into rivers, lakes and fields.We shouldn’t leave rubbish everywhere and spit in public places . We mustn’t pick the flowers or step on the grass in public. If everyone tries his best to protect the environment , the world will become much more beautiful and our life will be better and better .

三、Improve our environment

Good environment can make people feel happy. To improve the environment means to qualify our life . What should we do to improve our environment ?

We should plant more trees . And we should prevent those factories from pouring waste water into rivers , lakes and fields . Whenever we see litter on the ground , we should pick it up and throw it into a dustbin . Don’t spit in public places . Don’t draw on public walls . It’s our duty to keep our earth clean and tidy .

四、Pollution around us

In recent years our life is becoming better and better. But our environment is becoming worse and worse. It’s very bad for our life. Now many people have air-conditioners and cars, they produce (give off ) waste gas. More and more trees are being cut down. There are so much sand on the earth (leaving only sand ) . We often see factories pour waste into rivers or lakes. Water in the river is quite dirty. We haven’t enough clean water to drink in cities. Now we are in danger. It’s very necessary and important to protect the environment well. I think if everyone tries his best to protect the environment, the world will become much more beautiful , and our life will be better and better .

五、Make our world more beautiful !

Protecting the environment is becoming more and more important to humans . It’s our duty to take care of the nature around us . Animals and plants are our best friends ., and we should share the world with them . We shouldn’t kill wild animals , and we must protect forests because they are animals’ home . We must plant more trees and grass , they can make the world greener . The more beautiful the world is, the happier lives we will have . Let’s do our best to make the world beautiful.

六、Keep our school clean

We are studying in this school. It is our duty to keep it clean and tidy. It is not good to spit in public places, such as in the library, in the class. We shouldn’t leave rubbish here and there. Don’t draw pictures on the wall, they influence the look of our school . We should keep the classroom clean and tidy. And we should do some cleaning often. If everyone tries his best to do something useful for our school, I’m sure our school will be more beautiful .

七、My country life

I like to live in the countryside. I live in a small village. There is a river near it. Lots of trees are around my house. I can see a lot of farms and birds. There is less noise. The air here is cleaner and fresher. There are fewer cars. I read aloud early in the morning. When it is getting dark, the moon is bright in the sky. It’s very quiet . What a nice place I live in !

八、How to learn English well

As we know , English has become an international language. It is more popular than any

other language in China . English is widely spoken in the world and it is the most useful language around the world . But how to learn it well ?

The best way is to use it all the time . If we can talk in English , think in English we can learn it well . At school , we should learn to hear , speak, read and write carefully . We should spend enough time in practicing English . If we keep on working hard at English , we will be able to be good at it one day .

九、How I learn English

Hello, everyone. It is my honor to talk with all of you about how to learn English well . I like English very much . I always preview and master the main idea of the lesson before class. In class , I listen carefully , speak loudly and write carefully and take notes if necessary . After class , I do my homework carefully . I watch English movies and listen to English songs . I have booked an English newspaper . It’s Times English Post , I can learn a lot from it . I am not afraid of remembering the new words because I master many good methods . I hope you work hard at English and make progress every day . That’s all .

十、How I improved my English

When I began to learn English, I was poor at it. I was quite worried at that time. Later I 1istened to the teacher attentively in class, and made notes carefully. If I had any question, I asked my English teacher or my classmates for help. Every morning I read the English texts aloud and listened to the English tapes. In the evening, after finishing my homework, I always read some English and magazines.

Now I am one of the best students at English in my class.

十一、The importance of English

English is the most widely spoken in the world. It’s spoken by most people in the USA, Great Britain, Canada, Australia, and New Zealand. It's also very widely used as a foreign language in many other countries of the world. It's widely used for business between different countries. More than three quarters of the information on the Internet is in English, too. It is really a bridge to so much knowledge . English is used by travellers and business people around the world. It's one of the world's most important languages as it is so widely used. That's why more and more people in China are interested in learning English.

English is so useful that we must learn it well . Now let’s work hard at it and see who learns it faster and better in our class .

十二、I want to be an inventor

TVs, telephone, fridges, cars, planes, computers and many other things are important inventions. They have greatly changed our life. Many people have their ideas and wishes. They want to invent some new things for the world. I am one of them. I want to be an inventor in the future, Inventions can bring fun and happiness to our life and make our daily life more convenient. Our life will become better and better. Now I am a high school student. I will try my best to work hard at my lessons to make my dream come true.

十三、I want to be a tour guide

I want to be a tour guide because Beijing will host the 2008 Olympic Games. There will be many people to come to China from all over the world. Most of them don’t know Chinese. They want to visit many interesting places in China. I can be one of the guides. I can make much money, too. How happy I will be! So from now on , I must study hard. I am going to learn English every day. I will try my best to make it come true.

十四、I like the Internet

The Internet is playing an important part in our daily life. It’s very useful. I often search the Internet for some information. I can read the latest news, do some shopping, and get all kinds of information from it. I can also download the information that I need and I can send e-mails and make telephone calls to my friends on the internet. The most important thing is that I am able to study all my lessons on the Internet.

The Internet makes my life more interesting and colorful and it has a wide effect on my study and daily life. I like the internet very much. How about you / Will you have a try ?

十五、The Internet

The Internet is becoming more and more important to us. Without it, we can’t do work better. We can go shopping without going out of our houses. And we can listen to music or watch movies on the Internet. It can also help a lot with our study. We can learn much knowledge on different subjects, and get information as soon as possible. But now, some of us work, study or play on the Internet for long time, especially for young people to play computer games. It’s bad for our eyes and health. If we make good use of the Internet, it will be our best friends and help us a lot .

十六、Computer

Computer is a wonderful machine. It's a great invention in many years. It develops very quickly. The smallest computer is as big as a note-book. We call it pocket computer. Computer becomes more and more important in many ways. It has touched the lives of everyone, even people in faraway villages. It helps us to do with all kinds of information and we get knowledge from it. It can give us a lot fun.

十七、The importance of water

Of all the things we eat and drink, water is the most important. We can live without food for many days, but two or three days without water, usually makes people die.

However, not all of people understand this. They keep throwing rubbish into the rivers or lakes . Some factories even pour waste water into the river. As a result, many rivers and lakes have become so dirty that the water is no longer safe for people to drink .

Let’s do our best to keep the water clean to save ourselves .

十八、Water

Water is very important for our life. Every day we use water to drink, too cook and to wash. Water is necessary for all plants. They need water to grow. People can’t live without water. Plants will die without water. It is important to all living things. However, many people pollute lakes and rivers with waste water, so we must stop some people or some factories from wasting water or polluting water and help keep the water clean. At the same time we should save as much water as possible.

十九、I like sports

I feel that taking exercise is good for our health. I often felt tired when I was studying before. From this term I keep on running when I get up in the morning. After class I often go to play basketball with my friends. Now I feel much better than before and I never feel tired when I am studying And I improve a lot in my lessons. So please take exercise as often as possible .

二十、Introduce yourself

My name is Li Lei . I was born in Fuzhou on December 15 ,2000 . I’m studying at Yucai Middle School. I learn Chinese, math, English, physics, chemistry, politics, and so on. I like English best. My favorite sport is football. My hobbies are drawing and computer. I’m very

happy to live in a happy family. There are 3 people in my family. My father is a doctor. My mother is a teacher. We love each other very much .

二十一、My best friend

My best friend is --- He is 15 years old. We are both in the same class. He works very hard. He is never late for school and he does well in all his lessons. He is always ready to help others. My math is very poor, so he often helps me with my math after class. His parents are both teachers. They are very busy, so he often helps do the housework at home. He is a little shorter than me but he is very strong. He likes playing football very much at school. We often play football together and he plays it pretty well . He gets on well with us . Everyone in our class likes him .

篇三：初三中考英语作文1_2200字

Friday, February 28, 2014

2014中考英语作文题目预测及参考范文一

假定你是李华，最近你们班就“低碳”生活方式进行了讨论，你的美国朋友Jack来信向你询问讨论情况，请你用英语写封回信，简单参照作文地带介绍的以下讨论结果：

1.节水节电；

2.垃圾分类；

3.少用纸巾，重拾手帕；

4.步行，骑自行车或乘坐公交车。

参考词汇：低碳low carbon 纸巾tissue

注意：词数100以内(不含开头和结尾所给出的字数)；可适当增加细节了，以使行文连贯；开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Jack,

Thank you for your letter asking about our discussion on low carbon lifestyle. Here is something about it。

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Best wishes,

Li Bing

参考范文：

Dear Jack,

Thank you for your letter asking about our discussion on low carbon lifestyle. Here is something about it。

We can do a lot in our daily life to achieve the goal of living low carbon life. First, we’d better turn off lights if possible and spend less time watching TV or surfing the Internet. Saving water also matters much. Besides, we should sort out the rubbish, hoping that we might recycle some, which will surely benefit us a great deal. In addition, we suggest using handkerchiefs instead of tissues so that we can prevent more trees from being cut down. More importantly, when we go out, walking, riding bikes or taking buses should be our first choice, which contributes to a cleaner world。

B

A city is a very big place. Sometimes it’s a lonely place, too. There are thousands of people in a city, but some of themdon’t have any friends.

How about you? Do you have a lot of friends? If you don’t, make friends today. If you do, make another friend today.

Pick a stranger at your job or school. Walk up to him or her and say, “Hello. My name’s....What’s your name?”Start with a conversation(谈话).Smile, listen carefully, and show interest in your new friend’ s answers. Ask “Where are youfrom?” and “Do you like this city?” That’s a good way to start.

阅读下列短文，判断正（T）误（F）

（）1. A city is a very big and noisy and lonely place.

（）2. Everyone in the city has many friends.

（）3. The paragraph tells us not to make friends in a city.

（）4. When you wanted to make friends with someone, please say at first,“What’ s your name? How old are you?”

（）5. It’s a good thing to make friends with others.

篇四：初三英语辅导之2012中考英语作文集合_6200字

初三英语辅导之2012中考英语作文集合

一、关注留守儿童

如今，在我们身边，父母均在外打工的留守儿童比比皆是。关注留守儿童，事构建和谐社会的重要内容。关注留守儿童，要靠全社会的共同努力。你认为留守儿童面临的主要问题有那些？为了解决留守儿童的问题，请你向当地政府提建议

提示：1.缺乏父母的关爱，性格孤僻，学习压力大、自卑。

2.缺乏安全保障（家庭照官不力，容易犯错误甚至犯罪）。

建议：1.学校建立留守儿童心里咨询室，老师应该把爱播撒到每一个留守儿童的心田。

2.政府利用节假日建立留守儿童家长学校。

3.社会各界开展与留守儿童一帮一结对子的活动。

4.父母尽可能回到孩子身边，给孩子生活上和学习上的帮助和关爱。

Dear Mayor:

I'm a middle school student. I'm writing to tell you something aroud us. Nowadays, there are many left-behind children whose parents work away from their hometowns. Most of them are from the coutryside, you know, they have many problem. They are always lonely and stressed out because they are short of their parents' love. At the same time, they are easy to make mistakes even do some thing against the laws, because they're short of their families' care. How to solve their problems? In my eyes, the government can set up a parents school for these children on holidays, you can organize

Best wishes to you!

Sincerely,

Li Hua

二、环保(environmental matter)

The environmental matter is a hot topic nowadays. Not only does it affect our health, it also has a great impact on our future.

Due to lacking of environmental concepts, people''''s health has been greatly affected

by air, noise and water pollution. In order to live a better life, we need a cleaner world. We should now be concerned for environment by creating a better future for our next generation.

In conclusion, the environmental matter is an important issue that directly affects very human in the world!

三、保护我们的城市(Saving Our City)

It is very important to deal with the rubbish in cities. Rubbish must be thrown away or reused properly. Or it may cause a lot of problems. It may pollute the air and water. People may get ill when they breathe the polluted air or drink the polluted water.

Our city has started to face the problem. Some rubbish is sorted and sent to a certain place .Waste gas is cleaned before it goes into the air. Waste water is also cleaned before it is poured into rivers.

People should be prevented from throwing rubbish everywhere. We should try our best to take care of our environment and fight against pollution.

中考英语作文范文1：关于爱好

I like play football very much.I think it is one of the most popular way to relax.And it can help your body grow more strong.I often play football on PE lesson and after school.In this way I make friends with a lot of football-liker.we always play together.Football bring me so much,I like it!

中考英语作文范文2：爱好作文

Different people, different hobbies. What hobbies do you have?

My hobby is singing. It's a great hobby! It's fun and it makes me feel proud.

Singing can be used to relieve (解除) my fatigues (疲劳), and can help me improve my accent(腔调). Singing makes me happy when I'm sad. Singing songs can make you clever. I am always singing at home to share each other's joys and sorrow (悲痛) in our life and to learn many songs. I really enjoy singing.

It goes without saying that there are many different kinds of hobbies and they can't only (不仅) broaden (拓宽) our minds (智力) but also (而且) add more fun to our life. 中考英语作文范文3：兴趣爱好

I like play football very much.I think it is one of the most popular way to relax.And it can help your body grow more strong.I often play football on PE lesson and after school.In

this way I make friends with a lot of football-liker.we always play together.Football bring me so much,I like it!

中考英语作文范文4：my thinking of love

it take only a minute to get a crush on someone an hour to like someone,and a day to love someone,but it takes a liftime to forget someone to love someone is to let those we be just themselves and not twist them with our own image otherwise, we love only the reflection of ourselves wefine in them this is my think .

中考英语作文范文范文5：My Hobby

I am a 15-year-old student in junior Grade 3. Though I am occupied with my study, I would like to spend time on my hobbies, such as playing the piano, surfing the Internet.

One of my favourite hobby is reading. Reading has been in my life for many years, since I began to learn characters. It can not only kill the time, but also, more important, help improve my comprehension ability. When reading, I can learn a lot. Reading Shakespear's works, I know how Hamlet looks like. Reading Scorates, I can see how great ancient Greek philosophers are. Reading Lu Xu, I come back to the old time of China.

Reading really affect my life.

五、水污染Water Pollution

Everybody knows that there is serious problem of water pollution on the earth. Yes, water pollution is increasing.

Look! The water in the river is getting dirtier and dirtier. Most of fish in the water have died, and we can’t swim in the water.

My grandfather says, when he was very little, the water in the river was very clean. He often swam in the river with his friends.

That was before, but now we can’t see such clean rivers. Let’s protect the water from pollution, because we can’t live without water. The water is really important to us all.

六、水

Water is very important to us. If you don’t have water for three days, you will die. We can use water for flowers, swimming, washing and many different things. We use it to cook, make electricity, put out fires and so on. We use millions of liters of water every day.

Do you know how does the water come to your home? It travels through water pipes. Some are long and wide but some are short and narrow. Then the water travels through the water

pipes to the reservoirs. Then it travels through the water pipes to the river and to the special factories (we call water plants) that purify the water. When the water is purified, we can drink it. Please don’t leave garbage in the water on which we line, and keep the water clean.

七、问路

根据下列提示，编写一段题为“问路”的对话（60－－80个字）：

Green太太想去博物馆，但不知如何走，于是

就向一位警察询问。警察告诉她沿街走到第二个十字路口向左拐，拐角过去第三幢楼就是博物馆。 Asking the Way

Mrs. Green： Excuse me, but could you tell me the way to the museum?

Policeman： Certainly. Just go up this street and turn left at the second crossing. The third building from the corner is the museum. You can’t miss it.

Mrs. Green： Oh, let me see. Go down this street, turn left at the second crossing. and the museum is the third building from the corner. Am I right?

Policeman： Yes, that’s right.

Mrs. Green： Thank you very much. Bye-bye.

Policeman： You are welcome. Bye-bye.

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中考书面表达的评分标准

得分 (第一档) 12-15分 (第二档) 8-11分 (第三档) 4-7分 (第四档) 1-3分 (第五档) 0分 评 分 标 准 包含所有信息，内容完整，语句通顺，意思连贯， 没有或基本没有语法、拼写错误，书写规范，词 数符合要求。 包含大部分信息，内容较完整，表达基本清楚， 语句较通顺，仅有少量语法、拼写错误，书写规 范，词数基本符合要求。 写出基本信息，语句基本通顺，但句子较简单， 表达不够清楚，有部分语法、拼写错误。 仅能传递个别信息，通篇只有个别句子可读。 只字未写、通篇不知所云或写的内容与所要求的 内容无关。

一.书面表达中扣分情况分析：

1.审题不清，遗漏内容要点。 2.生搬硬套，时态混用。

3.语法错误较多，使用中文式表达。

4.单词拼写错误。 5.忽视书写，卷面不整洁。

二.常见错误分析

1.语言表达不规范 我们将在那儿吃午饭。 误：We will stay there have lunch. 正：We will have lunch there. 他认为你最好乘火车去广州。 误：He think that you best by train go to Guangzhou. 正：He thinks that you’d better go to Guangzhou by train.

2.谓语动词的漏用或误用 我们的教室很干净。

误：Our classroom very clean.

正：Our classroom is very clean. 他来自福建。 误：He is comes from Fujian. 正：He is from Fujian. 或 He comes from Fujian.

3.语态的误用

我们每天打扫教室。（用被动语态）

误：The classroom cleaned by us every day. 正：The classroom is cleaned by us every day.

4.时态的误用

他们结婚两年了。

误： They married for two years. 正： They have been married for two years.

5.名词单复数形式的错误

这个消息如此令人兴奋以致于我们大声叫起来。 误：The new was so exciting that we

shouted loudly . 正： The news was so exciting that we shouted loudly .

6.人称代词的错用

让她和我们玩游戏。 误 ：Let she play games with we . 正 ：Let her play games with us . 王老师教我们英语。 误： Miss Wang teaches our English .

正：Miss Wang teaches us English.

7.冠词的漏用、误用

他正在弹钢琴。 误：He is playing piano. 正：He is playing the piano. 8.介词的误用 我出生于1996年3月6日。 误：I was born in March 6th,1996. 正：I was born on March 6th,1996.

9.习惯搭配出错

请让李红唱首歌。 误: Let Li Hong to sing a song ,please. 正 : Let Li Hong sing a song ,please. 当我走过操场时，我看见康康在踢足球。 误: I saw Kangkang played football when I passed the playground . 正: I saw Kangkang playing football when I passed the playground .

10.主谓不一致

我的一个好朋友在三中学习。 误: One of my best friends study in NO.3 Middle School .

正: One of my best friends studies in NO.3 Middle School .

How can we write a

good

composition(作文)?

basic rules (写作考试规则)

search（审） list（列） add(加: 开头和结尾) connect(连) beautiful(美：谚语/例子)

牛刀小试

审(search)

2013年3月我国首次发现人感染H7N9禽流感病例，目前人感染 禽流感病例仍处于散发状态，2014年1月20日福建省确诊7例人 感染H7N9禽流感病例，请你以How to keep healthy to prevent H7N9为题写一篇英语小短文，从以下几个方面说说你的看法。

1.远离家禽 2.饮食习惯 3.个人卫生习惯 4.生活习惯 要求：1.要用上所有信息 2.不要出现真实的人名和校名 3.词数90词左右 提示词：禽流感Avian flu(H7N9);感染:infect;口罩： mouth-cover;流鼻涕：sneeze

列(list)

根据以下关键词列出文章的要点, 并且写出英文提纲。

• The situation of H7N9 • Some methods of keeping healthy to prevent H7N9 • Give some advice on how to deal with the illness（call for people to keep heathy to prevent H7N9)

文章要点

• 人感染禽流感病例仍处于散发状态 As we know, the H7N9 is spreading quickly around the country. 远离家禽 keep/stay away from birds 饮食习惯 keep a balanced diet 个人卫生习惯 生活习惯 keep healthy living habits

wash hands before meals

don’t spit everywhere

cover your mouth or nose with paper or handkerchiefs when we have to cough or sneeze

wear the mouth-cover

do more exercise

•

•

It is necessary for us to realize the Avian flu can be prevented if you develop good living habits. We should stay away from chickens and ducks and so on.We shouldn’t forget to wash hands before meals. Don’t spit everywhere and try to cover your mouth or nose with paper or handkerchiefs when we have to cough or sneeze. Remember to wear the mouth-cover if we have to go to the public places. • If you are ill, try to stay at home, and take some medicine. Pay attention to your daily body temperature. If you have a high fever, go to the hospital. If you follow these advice, you will be healthy. （the ending）

• 加首尾，使结构完整。 As we know, the Avian flu is spreading around • 可以采取总分总结构，开头或结尾的句 the country. We should take some effective 子应注意简洁、漂亮。 measures to prevent it. （the beginning）

加(add)

3.精彩的开头和结尾将使你多得分！ 开头常用语:

(1) As we all know,…=It’s well known that… =As is known to all,… (2) It is true that… (3) Every coin has two sides.

结尾常用语:

(1)As a result (2)In my opinion\view… (3)I think\hope… (4)In a word\in short… (5)From the above 综上所述

As we know, the H7N9 is spreading around the country. We should take some measures to prevent it. • First, It is necessary for us to realize the Avian flu can be prevented if you develop good living habits. Second, We should stay away from birds,because the H7N9 can be spreaded easily among birds .Besides,We shouldn’t forget to wash

hands before meals. Don’t spit everywhere and try to cover your mouth or nose with paper or handkerchiefs when we have to cough or sneeze. • What’s more,Remember to wear the mouth-cover if we have to go to the public places. Last but not least, If you are ill, try to stay at home, • and take some medicine. Pay attention to your daily body temperature. If you have a high fever, go to the hospital. If you follow these advice, you will be healthy. •

•

连(connect)

美(beautify)

As we know, the H7N9 is spreading around the country. We should take some effective measures to prevent it. • First,it is necessary for us to realize the Avian flu can be prevented if you develop good living habits. Second,we should stay away from birds. We shouldn’t forget to wash hands before meals. Besides,don’t spit everywhere and try to cover your mouth or nose with paper or handkerchiefs when we have to cough or sneeze. What’s more, remember to wear the mouth-cover if we have to go to the public places, such as the crowded cinemas, supermarkets ,buses ,where the flu may spread easily. Of course, we can take exercise more often and take good sleep to build your body up. It is good for us to reduce the risk of being infected. • Last but not least,if you are ill, try to stay at home, and take some medicine. Pay attention to your daily body temperature. If you have a high fever, go to the hospital.

加谚语(Proverb/saying)

可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。

It is good for us students to take exercise… As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” It is good for us students to take exercise.

锻炼对学生有好处

加谚语 加谚语 (Proverb/saying) (Proverb/saying) 集中注意力于学习

We should concentrate on our studies.

可用于” 可用于开头和结尾，多是结尾。 beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。

As the saying goes, “No pains, no gains.” We should concentrate on our studies...

加谚语 加谚语 (Proverb/saying) (Proverb/saying) 加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法

Joining the English club is a good way to learn English.

可用于” 可用于开头和结尾，多是结尾。 beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。

As the saying goes, “Practice makes perfect.” So joining the English club is a good way to learn English.

加谚语 加谚语 (Proverb/saying) (Proverb/saying) 加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法

Joining the English club is a good way to learn English.

可用于” 可用于开头和结尾，多是结尾。 beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。

As the saying goes, “Practice makes perfect.” So joining the English club is a good way to learn English.

Enjoy some proverbs

1.Practice makes perfect. 2.Think twice before you do.

熟能生巧。

三思而后行。

3.Where there is a will,

there is a way. 4.Do as the Romans do. 入乡随俗。 5.The early bird catches the worm.

早起的鸟

儿有虫吃。

有志者事竟成。

6.Failure is the mother of success. 失败是成功之母。

Enjoy some proverbs 7.It is no use crying over spilt milk.

覆水难收。

8.An apple a day keeps the doctor away.

一天一个苹果， 医生远离我。

9.All roads lead to Rome. 条条大路通罗马。 10.Never too old to learn.

活到老，学到老。

Writing skills （“写”的技巧）

方法一:善用词汇

甚至善用高级词汇

更经常做运动并且有足够睡眠来强健身体。 A We should take more exercise and take enough sleep. We should build us up. B Of course, we can take exercise more often and take good sleep to build your body up. .

对于我们来说，减少被感染的风险是好的。

A It is good for us to reduce the infectors.

B It is good for us to reduce the risk of being reflected

Which is better?

他们在海滩上听音乐。

A B They listened to the music on the beach. They enjoyed the music on the beach.

Which is better?

我希望你能帮助我。

A B

I wish you can help me. I’m looking forward to your help.

Which is better?

他们很早就到了。

A They arrived early.

B

They arrived as early as they could.

Which is better?

最后，他的狗得救了，他感到很惊讶。

A B His dog was saved at last. He was very surprised. To his surprise, his dog was saved at last.

我认为学英语很有趣。

A I think learning English is interesting.

B

I find it really fun to learn English .

我们应该保护环境。

A B We should protect the environment. It’s our duty to protect the environment.

Writing skills （“写”的技巧）

方法二:活用多种句型

如果我们不得不去公共场合，例如拥 挤的电影院，超市，公车，这些地方流 感容易传播，我们要记得带口罩。

A If we have to go to the public places, such as the crowded cinemas, supermarkets, buses, we will remember to wear the mouth-cover. In these places, the flu will be spreaded easily.

B Remember to wear the mouth-cover if we have to go the public places, such as the crowded cinemas, supermarkets, buses,where the flu may spread easily.

她还小，搬不动这么重的箱子。

A B

C

She is very young.

She can’t carry the heavy box.

She is too young to carry the heavy box.

She is so young that she can’t carry the …

D

She is not old enough to carry the…

Writing skills （“写”的技巧）

方法三:妙用关联词

关联词(connection words)

1.表示并列或递进: and, as well as, both…and, what’s more not only…but also, neither…nor 2.表示选择: or, either…or 3.表示转折: but,however,although\though,after all,anyway 4.表示因果: because, so, therefore,since,for,as a result 5.表示条件: if , unless 6.表示对比: instead, not…but, while, in the same way, on the one hand…on the other hand 7.表示解释: for example, for instance, such as, that is to say, in other words,to tell the truth 8.表示顺序: to begin w

ith, firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next, later, since then, from then on, finally, in the end 9.表示强调: also, besides, especially, actually, in fact 10.表示结论: all in all, altogether, in a word, generally speaking, in short

Let’s try

• Though\Although _____________ I am tired, I keep on working till midnight. • He didn’t go to movies, he went to instead the concert ______. like • We like doing kinds of sports _____ swimming, running and hiking. First he stood up. Then he got out. • _____, Finally\At last _____, Next he went back. ____________, he smiled.

Writing skills （“写”的技巧）

方法四:妙用引文和例子 （多用于“the body”）

•

First, it is necessary for us to realize the Avian flu can be prevented if you develop good living habits. Second, we should keep away from birds, because the H7N9 can be spreaded easily among birds. We shouldn’t forget to wash hands before meals. Besides, don’t spit everywhere and try to cover your mouth or nose with paper or handkerchiefs when we have to cough or sneeze. What’s more, remember to wear the mouthcover if we have to go to the public places, such as the crowded cinemas,supermarkets ,buses ,where the flu may spread easily. Of course, we can take exercise more often and take good sleep to build your body up. It is good for us to reduce the risk of being infected.

加例子

青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球。

We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth. For example, we can use recyclable bags instead of plastic bags, stop using napkins, plant more trees and save water and energy.

加例子

在家里，我经常帮助父母亲干家务活。

I often help my parents do housework, such as washing dishes, folding the clothes, taking out the trash and so on.

Writing skills （“写”的技巧）

方法五:结尾提出倡议号召

Let’s … Do it now ! / Don’t do it again! As students, we should start from ourselves.

Don’t wait. Join us now! Start to join us now! Don’t put it off! Become a volunteer today! How amazing! I can’t wait! Save animals! Save Ourselves! Save our planet! Don’t hesitate(犹豫). It will be great fun!

知己知彼，学范文

As we know, the H7N9 is spreading around the country. We should take some effective measures to prevent it. • First,it is necessary for us to realize the Avian flu can be prevented if you develop good living habits. Second, we should keep away from birds, because the H7N9 can be spreaded easily among birds. We shouldn’t forget to wash hands before meals. Besides, don’t spit everywhere and try to cover your mouth or nose with paper or handkerchiefs when we have to cough or sneeze. What’s more, remember to wear the mouth-cover if we have to go to the public places, such as the crowded cinemas, supermarkets ,buses ,where the flu may spread easily. Of course, we can take exercise more often and take good sleep to bu

ild your body up. It is good for us to reduce the risk of being infected. • Last but not least,if you are ill, try to stay at home, and take some medicine. Pay attention to your daily body temperature. If you have a high fever, go to the hospital.

五.可套用的典型例句

1.关于环境保护问题（09年中考题）

• It’s our duty to save water\love and protect our environment. • As we know,water is very important to us.\we can’t live without water. • It is very important to take care of our environment. • But some people don’t care about it.\They waste a lot of water in their daily life. • Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted.

• We should plant more tress in order to live better and more healthily in the future. • Trees are very helpful and important for us. • We shouldn’t throw litter onto the ground\spit in a public place\cut down trees. • We must pick up some rubbish and throw it into a dustbin. • If everyone makes contribution to protecting the environment,the world will become much more beautiful. • Only in this way can we live happily.

中考链接

2009年福州市中考书面表达（12分）

“地球一小时” 是世界自然基金会（wwf）应对 全球气候变化所发起的一项活动，倡议世界各城 市在特定时间熄灯一小时，以表明对环保行动的 支持。请你以“Earth Hour”为主题为校园“英 语学科园地”撰稿，宣传这一备受全球瞩目的环 保活动。

2.关于新生事物评价（如电脑、手机、机器人 等）

• Now computer is becoming more and more important\popular among the middle school students. • We can do lots of things with it. • It makes our life easier. • We should make good use of it. • Of course,students should study,but we should keep a proper balance between study and rest.

3.关于语言学习

• My favorite subject is English. • We have a lot of fun in English classes.\Our English teacher often makes us happy in English classes. • I like English and try my best to learn it. • I have some difficulty in learning English. • So English is very important and I like it very much.

4.关于健康问题（2010及2011年中考题）

• It is very important to keep healthy.\Health is very important to us teenagers. • We should eat healthy food\do more exercise. • There is an old saying,”An apple a day keeps the doctor away.” • Doing sports every day helps us healthy and energetic. • Good health can keep us enjoy our life while poor health leads to nothing. • Studying late at night is bad for our health.

中考链接 2010年福州市中考书面表达（12分）

为满足人们日益增长的健身需求，我国政府于 2009年将每年的8月8日定为“全民健身日”。 今年的“全民健身日”即将来临，为了让这项活 动更加深入人心，某英文报纸举办了一次征文比 赛。现在请你以“Let’s Do Sports”为题写一篇 短文

，向该报投稿。 要求：1.短文词数80左右； 2.必须包括上述提示内容，语句通顺，意思连贯， 书写规范，可适当发挥； 3.短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关 信息，否则不予评分。

中考链接

2011年福州市中考书面表达（12分）

目前中学生早餐问题已经引起社会关注，你所在 学校的学生会在5月20日“全国学生营养日”开展问 卷调查，其结果令人担忧。请你根据调查结果写一篇 短文，提倡营养早餐。 学生比例 早餐情况 健康状况 55% 有规律地吃早餐 身体健康，精力充沛 25% 吃垃圾食品 营养不均衡 20% 没有吃早餐 感到饥饿，上课无法认 真听讲，容易生病

提示词：regularly, active, junk food（垃圾食品）， a balanced diet, as a result

中考链接

2011年福州市中考书面表达（12分）

要求： 1. 所写内容必须包括表格中所提供的信息，并 发表自己的看法。 2. 所给的提示词必须全部用上，可适当发挥。 3. 字数80词左右。文章的开头已给出，不计入 总词数。 Breakfast is important.But not all the students have realized its importance.Here’s the result of our survey.About 55 percent of the students_________________________________

中考链接

2013年福州市中考书面表达（12分）

为了进一步增强中学生的安全意识，提高自我保护能力，某校开展了以 “安全”为主题的英语演讲比赛。 请你根据以下要点提示写一篇演讲稿。 2.遇险报警

1.慎重交友

How to keep safe

4.其他（1—2点） 3.安全饮食

注意：1）内容必须包括所给的全部要点，可适当发挥； 2)表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范； 3）词数80词左右。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：be careful, on line, danger, call…for, go bad

• How to keep safe? • As teenagers, we should always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe? Here are some of my suggestions. First,______________________________ __________________________________ __________________________________ __

写作要点：

• • • • • • • • 1. be careful when we make friends 2. call the police for help in time 3. keep ourselves safe 4. eat healthily and safely 5. go bad 6. do harm to 7. Last but not least 8. In short

参考范文

• As teenagers, we should always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe? Here are some of my suggestions. First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially on line. Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. Also, we ought to eat healthily and safely. Eating food that goes bad will do harm to our health. Last but not least, summer is coming, and we must remember it’s dangerous to swim in the river. • In short, safety must come first!

Homework: 1. 背诵八下U8T2—T3单词 2. 写作文

：2013年中考作文 3. 周报23、24期 4. 新题型：

篇六：中考作文讲座_初三英语_英语_初中教育_教育专区_25200字怎样准备英语中考 写作篇

优秀水平标准

1、能准确运用词汇和句型结构，较生动 和详细地描述情境或叙述所给话题，能 准确自如地表达态度和感情。  2、能用流畅的语言组织常见体裁的短文， 逻辑清楚，结构完整，层次清晰，内容 充实，文体恰当。  3、能在写作中恰当地引用资料，能用谚 语、俗语等，能清楚地阐述自己的观点 和评述他人的观点，具有一定的人文意 识。

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写作分值逐年提高

05年10分

06年14分

07、08年16分 09、10、11年18分

12年20分

内容（8分）

是否紧扣主题

是否涉及到所要求的几个方面

语言（8分）

大小写、标点符号、单词拼写、 词法、句法是否正确

字数是否达标

组织结构分（4分）

内容充实，不写废话；上下文连贯、

用语规范、表达准确、无或少见语法错 误；词汇和句型句式运用恰当，多见好

句型和习惯表达用语者，可给4分。

组织结构分

通篇句型、句式单一，词汇贫乏者，即

使无语法错误，一般亦不予给组织结构

分。

学会审题

写人物 写事件 写物件

写场所

写感想

03年：To be a lovely Shanghainese

（做可爱的上海人） 04年：Leaving school （毕业时分）

05年：Growing pains and gains（成长的烦恼与快乐） 06年：I have a dream （我有一个梦想）

07年：Things I hate to do

(我不喜欢……)

08年：Love around me （我身边的爱） 09年：I want to do something for my school (我想为学校做点事） 10年：I am proud of myself (我为自己感到自豪) 11年：I’m a member of …（我是……的一员）

要求

1）要用正确的时态

2）要用恰当的词语

3）要用清晰的思路 4）要用不同的句子

5）要用一定的连接

句型单一

常见错误

东拉西扯 时态错误 用词不当 结构松散

脱离主题

字迹潦草

怎样改进写作

学习写作的步骤和方法

学会套题的技巧和思路 用好题目的提示和问题

使用点睛之句和习语谚语

3 + 1的综合写作模式

Everybody has his own dream. My dream is to be a tour guide. Some people may think it’s tiring to be a tour guide. But I don’t think so because I can visit many places of interest around the world and I can learn different cultures and customs. Besides, I also can meet different people in different places. So I really want to be a guide. It is an exciting job. From now on, I must study geography well. I think through my hard work, my dream will come true in the future.

（07中考） Write at least 60 words about the topic “Things I Hate to Do”. ( 以“我不喜欢……”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文， 标点 符号不占格。) Use the following points as a guide. (短文须包含下列要点) What are the things that you hate to do? What do you hate doing most? Why? (Give at least two reasons.) Things I Hat

e to Do Most of the time I do things which I enjoy. However, there are still things that I hate to do. …

Most of the time I do things which I enjoy. However, there are still things that I hate to do.

I hate to keep pets and tell lies. The thing that I hate doing most is smoking. As we all know, smoking is not only bad for ourselves but also harmful to others. Whenever my father smokes, I feel rather sick. Besides, it is a waste of money to smoke, I think. What’s more, smoking pollutes the air. So I hate smoking most.

Most of the time I do things which I enjoy. However, there are still things that I hate to do. I hate doing things against rules. I hate being indifferent when others are in trouble. But, the thing I hate doing most is to be dishonest. It is really an immoral thing to be dishonest. You will feel guilty after cheating others. If your lie is recognized, you’ll get punishments. You will never be trusted once you tell lies, and not respected as well. I hate people who are dishonest. I hate being dishonest, and I hope that everyone is honest to others.

（08中考） Write at least 60 words about the topic “Love around me” (以“我身边的爱” 为题写一篇不少于60个

词的短文，标点符号不占格。)

Use the following points as a guide (短文须包含下列

要点)

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Is there any love around you?

How do you feel when you get love from him / her / them? What are you going to do to show your love?

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There is love around me. For example, my mother took good care of me when I was sick every day. What’s more? She always buys plenty of drinks and food I like for me, as well as many toys. She also helps me with my study so that I can make great progress. Thus I feel deeply moved. I’m thankful to her for the things she did for me these years. So I have made up my mind that I will work harder at my study to show my love to her.

It’s widely accepted that everyone needs love. And I think there is always love around me. My parents show love to me by looking after me well. My classmates' help makes me feel their love. I’m so moved that words can't express how much I love them! So I will spare no effort to help my parents do housework and help my friends in return. Finally, I really want to say thanks to them from the bottom of my heart!

I‘m a lucky teenager because there is lots of love around me. For example, my parents love me very much. They encouraged me to be brave when I failed to pass the 800-meter race last term. I’m very thankful to them. Their love makes me feel warm and powerful. In order to show my love, I’m going to help them with housework. This will enable them to have more time to rest. Love around me is great.

（09中考） Write at least 60 words about the topic “I want to do something for my school”. （以“我想为学校做件事”为 题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。） Use the following points as a reference. （以

下内容仅 供参考）  What do you want to do for your school?  Why do you want to do it?  How are you going to do it?

After four years’ study at school, the idea of buying some mirrors for the school comes into my mind, because mirrors are just like my eyes, looking at everything around, as well as sending my best wishes to my teachers and classmates. I’ll buy mirrors of all shapes and sizes. For example, the rectangle ones are the doors to success while the round ones stand for my eyes. I’ll set up all the mirrors by myself to show how much I love my school. That’s what I want to do for my school.

It’s widely believed that a clean environment plays an important part in our school life. Needless to say, school is my second home, so I want to try my best to make my school clean and tidy. In my opinion, picking up the rubbish on the ground is the basic way of making my school clean. What’s more, telling others the importance of protecting our school environment is necessary. “Nothing is impossible for a willing heart.” I hope my school will be more attractive with its clean environment.

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Now that I’m leaving secondary school in a few days, I want to write a song for my school to express my gratitude. The lyrics will be full of our glorious memories, and the music will be played by the band of our own. I hope that the teachers and students will enjoy the song as it can always remind us of our unforgettable school life even if we’ll be apart some day. You see, now I’ve got to work hard to make my dream of writing a song for my school come true!

I’ve been eagerly hoping to help improve the environment of our school. The reason is that some students in our school have poor habits of littering everywhere and stepping on the lawns randomly. They’re doing harm to the school’s beauty. To change the current situation, I’m going to put up posters and signs telling the students to take care of environment. I’m also going to give short speeches to arouse their awareness of protecting the school’s environment. I’m truly thankful to my school for providing me with much knowledge and teaching me the concept of love, kindness, honesty and so on. I want to do something meaningful for it. With the above-mentioned efforts, I’m sure that my school will become a more beautiful place.

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Write at least 60 words about the topic “I am proud of myself”. （以“我为自己感到自豪”为题写 一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。  Use the following points as reference. （以下内 容仅供参考）

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What kind of person are you? What makes you proud of yourself? (Give an example/examples.) Why are you proud of yourself?

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I am a sunny boy filled with confidence and the joy of life. As a music lover, playing the piano makes me proud of myself. Every day, I often play the piano for a while to relax myself. Also, my family members quite enjoy the w

onderful melodies. I believe music is of great power. And playing the piano enables me to learn the joy of life. So, I’m proud of myself because I bring happiness to my family as well as myself by playing the piano.

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I’m a person who is always confident and ready to try anything new. However, swimming has once been a nightmare for me after drowning in the water. When I finally ruled the water around my body, I felt rather proud of myself. At the beginning of the swimming test, I took a deep breath and then jumped into the water. Fears disappeared when I went straight ahead. I reached the wall in the end full of joy and pride. Since then, I realized the meaning of the saying, ‘Nothing ventured, nothing gained’!

Confidence plays an important role in daily life. I am

a confident person and I am always proud of myself. First of all, I feel glad that I often learn to

share with others. That’s because it not only enables me to get more ideas and experience from others, but also shows that I have the ability and willing to help others. As a famous saying goes, one flower makes no garden. Learning to share with others makes me have more friends. Second, I am always ready to care for others. When my classmates have problems they can’t solve, I often do them a favour. All these make me proud of myself.

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I used to be a shy girl, but after that experience, I have become more and more confident. It was my turn to give a speech to the whole class on how to learn English well. At first, I was afraid that I nearly wanted to ask the teacher if I could give up the chance. However, I told myself that I should give myself a challenge because it was really necessary for a person to be confident. I prepared a lot and encouraged myself much. At last, to my great happiness, the speech was perfectly successful. I’m proud of myself because I’m no longer a shy girl. I’ve changed myself to a girl who is full of confidence. 返回

3+1 的综合写作模式

3= 对三个问题的完整回答

+= 对某个重点问题的扩写 1=

点睛之句的点题和收尾

The most important things in my life

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Use the following points as a guide:

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What are the important things in your life?

Which one do you think is the most important thing? Why do you think so?

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Student’s Writing

There are many important things in my life, such as my eyesight, my subjects. Now, the most important thing in my life is the test in June. If I do well in it, I will study in a good school, but if I do badly in it, I will study in a school that I don’t want. It’s very important, I think. (62字)

点评：内容空泛， 选材俗套，结构不严谨，缺乏立意 深刻的中心意思的表达。

There are always many important things that may happen in our life. Q1: What the things in Among them, are learning toimportant be brave, learning to be confident your life? are the important things in my life.

举例:

Q2: Which do you think is the mos

t thing? “Share”important is another word for “ exchange with each other”.

It enables us to get more ideas or experience from others. It also shows we have the ability and Q3: Why do you that think so? will to help others. As a famous saying goes “One flower makes no garden”, so we should learn to share with others.

I think learning to share is the most important.

(共87字)

Life is just like a painting, colorful and meaningful.

There are always many important things that may happen in our life. Among them, learning to be brave, learning to be confident are the important things in my life. I think learning to share is the most important. Why do I think so? “Share” is another word for “ exchange with each other”. It enables us to get more ideas or experience from others. It also shows that we have the ability and will to help others. That can help us to have more friends. In my opinion, learning to share is a kind of “life skills”. As a famous saying goes “One flower makes no garden”, so we should learn to share with others.

(119)

注意

审题要切中题意 描述要条理清楚 表达要语句通顺 书写要清晰规范 身份要绝对避免 字数要力争达到

各类题材作文

Mr Li teaches us geography. He is tall and thin. Though Mr Li is in his fifties, he is still very active. He likes traveling very much and often shows us the photos of many historical interests he took during his trips. He has a great knowledge in geography, and it makes his lessons very interesting. Most of us are fond of his lessons, because they let us know the world better. Besides, he is always friendly and kind to us all. In a word, Mr Li is my favorite teacher.

As we all know, the Great Wall is located in North China. It is 6,700 kilometers long and thus known as the “10,000-li Great Wall”. The building of the wall went on for more than 2,000 years, from 700 BC to 1,400 AD. Thousands of people lost their lives while building it. As one of the seven wonders in the world, the Great Wall was used to protect the Chinese nation from the enemies in history. It is our pride and shows the wisdom of the Chinese people.

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My hobby is collecting stamps. I took up this hobby on my twelfth birthday when my uncle gave me some wonderful stamps as a present. Some of them were Chinese, but most of them were foreign. They looked so beautiful that I decided to collect stamps from then on. So far I have collected thousands of stamps from different countries. I not only get fun out of stamps but enrich my knowledge as well. I have learned a lot about history, culture and customs of the countries they come from.

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I have never given much thought to why I like playing the piano. I just consider it as my hobby, even part of my life. It is almost ten years since I took up the piano. In my opinion, I can not only relax myself from my heavy homework by playing the piano, but also learn something important from it. Once I failed to

play a piece completely, but I really wanted to do it well, so I kept practicing hard every day. A few weeks later, I was able to do it much better. From this experience I have learnt that “Practice makes perfect.” It goes without saying I will keep playing the piano all my life.

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Dancing is my hobby. When I was a little girl, I always admired the girls dancing with beautiful dresses and even wanted to be a member of them. Soon I joined a dancing group at the age of six. I attended dancing classes every Saturday. Dancing is a good way to express my feelings. My teacher told me dancers must show our best part to the audience even though we feel bad. From then on I didn’t spread bad feelings to someone else any longer. Needless to say dancing is my hobby and I will enjoy it all my life.

Jim, Thank you for inviting me to the weekend party, but I’m sorry to tell you that I won’t be able to come. One of my friends called me from America that he would come to Shanghai this weekend. He said that he would arrive at Pudong International Airport and asked me to meet him there. During his stay in Shanghai, I’ll show him around some places of interest, and even our school. How happy I will be to see him after his long absence. Hope you will have a good time with your friends at the party. Yours

Dear Editor, I’m a student of Class Two, Grade Nine. I’m interested in English. In my opinion, English is very useful and important to us. That’s why I try to listen to English on the radio and keep a diary every day. However, I find it not easy for me to memorize words. Besides, we have many chances to speak English, but I’m very shy. So when it is my turn to speak, I often feel very nervous and I am afraid of making mistakes. No matter how hard I try, I can’t improve my English. What should I do? Please give me some advice. Looking forward to your reply.

Thanks to the open-door policy, Shanghai is developing fast. Every day thousands of tourists come here for a visit. As students of Shanghai, we should act well to show that the city and its people are lovely. In order to be lovely Shanghainese, we should always be ready to help others. We should neither speak loudly in public places nor throw litter here and there. Especially we shouldn’t cross the roads when the traffic light is red. I want to be a lovely Shanghainese, and I know I must try every day.

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Thanks to the open-door policy, Shanghai is developing faster and faster. As a Shanghainese, my dream is to become a lovely citizen. I should neither talk loudly in public places nor cross the road when the traffic light is red. As we all know, Shanghai has won the bid to hold the 2010 World Expo. Needless to say I will do everything possible to tell the world that Shanghainese are lovely.

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The summer holiday is coming. To me, a 9thgrader, this means that I’m leaving my school and becoming a senior high student. So it might be necessary for me to attend several class

es to set a good base for further study. As I’m good at English and physics, I plan to learn these subjects ahead of time so that I can do better in the competition in the future. I’m sure to enjoy the process of learning. And the coming holiday, I think, will certainly be busy and rewarding.

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As my summer holiday is coming soon, I have made a plan for my summer holiday. It’s to write a novel. Since I will no longer be a child after my graduation from middle school, I should start to write something down to realize my dream of being a writer. I will write it in order to remember my happy life in middle school, too. I will write the novel on my computer at home every day. I believe there will be a wonderful novel after the two-month holiday!

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In my opinion, it’s everybody’s duty to do the housework. Mothers shouldn’t always be responsible for the chores as they aren’t “machines” and they need rest as well. Too much housework will do harm to their health. I suggest children share some chores with their parents because it is their duty to do housework. Besides, it can also help them develop a sense of independence and responsibility, which will surely be useful in future. Therefore, each of the family members should do his part in the housework, no matter who he is!

套写的技巧和思路

利用作文的开头写出主题——点题 利用范文的句子回答问题——切题 配以合适的连接和过渡词——流畅

利用作文的结尾重申主题——呼应

Water Water is one of the most important natural resources in the world. Man can’t live without water. But only 3% of the water is fresh water and 5% of the fresh water is available in lakes and rivers. So we must save and protect water resources. Fix any leaky tap and take a shorter shower. Don’t let the tap run when you brush your teeth. The less water we waste or pollute, the more we’ll have for tomorrow.

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I hate to do 我不喜欢……

(2007年中考作文）  What are the things that you hate to do?  What do you hate doing most? Why? (Give at least two reasons) You can begin like this:  Most of the time I do things that I enjoy. However, there are still things I hate doing, such as…

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Things I hate to do

Most of the time I do things that I enjoy. However, there are still things I hate doing, such as littering or jay-walking. And something I hate doing most is to waste water because water is one of the most important natural resources in the world. Man can’t live without water. But only 3% of the water is fresh water and 5% of the fresh water is available in lakes and rivers. So we must save and protect water resources. The less water we waste or pollute, the more we’ll have for tomorrow.

Something I’d most like to do  我最想做……  (杨浦区08学年初三期中考作文）

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 What

is the thing that you’d most like to

do?  Why would you like to do it most? (give at least

two reasons)

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Something I’d most like to do is to save and protect water resources, because water is one of the most important natural resources in the world。Man can’t live without water. But only 3% of the water is fresh water and 5% of the fresh water is available in lakes and rivers. So We mustn’t waste water resources. We should fix any leaky tap or take a shorter shower. And we also can’t let the tap run when we brush our teeth. The less water we waste or pollute, the more we’ll have for tomorrow.

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An Unforgettable Thing

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一件难忘的事

(杨浦区07学年初三期中考作文）  When and where did it happen?  Why do you think it unforgettable?

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You can begin like this

 Everybody

has something unforgettable. For me……was such a story

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Everybody has something unforgettable. For me, an English lesson about water resources was such a story. Last Friday we had the English lesson. From the lesson I knew that water is one of the most important natural resources in the world. Man can’t live without water. But only 3% of the water is fresh water and 5% of the fresh water is available in lakes and rivers. After class we all promised to save and protect water resources. The lesson was so important that I’ll remember it forever.

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On My Way to School

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上学路上

(杨浦区07学年模拟考作文） I saw…on my way to school a fire hydrant (消防龙头) was leaking call the firemen ask…to fix the leaky hydrant be late for school be happy

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Yesterday on my way to school I saw a fire hydrant was leaking. I was very worried because I knew that water is one of the most important natural resources in the world. Man can’t live without water. But only 3% of the water is fresh water and 5% of the fresh water is available in lakes and rivers. So we must save and protect water resources. I immedietely called the firemen and asked them to fix the leaky hydrant . After that I went to school. Although I was late, I felt very happy.

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A Story about My Parents

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爸爸妈妈的故事

(08年上海市试运转作文）

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take every opportunity to … if the tap is leaky… when they brush… told me…

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My parents always take every opportunity to save water. If the tap is leaky, they will fix it at once. When they brush their teeth, they never let the tap run. They often tell me that water is one of the most important natural resources in the world. Man can’t live without water. But only 3% of the water is fresh water and 5% of the fresh water is available in lakes and rivers. From their words I learned the importance of saving water. I think although my parents are ordinary people, they are real heroes in my heart.

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I want to do something for my school

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我想为学校做件事 (09年中考作文）

What do you want to do for your school?  Why do you want to do it?  How are you going to do

it?

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I am proud of myself

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我为自己感到骄傲 (10年中考作文）

What kind of person are you?  What makes you proud of yourself? (Give an example / examples)  Why are you proud of yourself?

学会用几篇范文 套同一个主题

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1 Water Water is one of the most important natural resources in the world。 Few everyday tasks can be performed without water. But only 3% of the water is fresh water and 5% of the fresh water is available in lakes and rivers. So we must save and protect water resources. Fix any leaky tap or take a shorter shower. The less water we waste or pollute, the more we’ll have for tomorrow. Something I’d Most Like to Do I’d most like to save and protect water resources, because water is one of the most important natural resources in the world。Few everyday tasks can be performed without water. But only 3% of the water is fresh water and 5% of the fresh water is available in lakes and rivers. We should fix any leaky tap or take a shorter shower. The less water we waste or pollute, the more we’ll have for tomorrow.

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2 How to help others I think we can do a lot for people in an earthquake-stricken area. First, we can organize a charity sale and a charity performance to collect money. Second, we can donate food, water, clothes and tents through the Red Cross. Third, we can provide workers to rebuild their houses. If everybody gives others a helping hand, the world will be more beautiful.

Something I’d Most Like to Do I’d most like to help people in an earthquake-stricken area. First, we can organize a charity sale and a charity performance to collect money. Second, we can donate food, water, clothes and tents through the Red Cross. Third, we can provide workers to rebuild their houses. If everybody gives others a helping hand, the world will be more beautiful.

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3 A Holiday Plan We will go on a four-day trip to Beijing. The trip will start on July 1 and will end on July 4. We will stay at a four-star hotel because the services there will be good. The Great Wall, the Summer Palace and Tian An Men Square are the most famous spots for sightseeing. We will experience Beijing’s culture and customs. I think the trip will be rewarding and enjoyable. Something I’d Most Like to Do I’d most like to go on a four-day trip to Beijing with my friends. The trip will start during the summer holidays. We will stay at a four-star hotel because the services there will be good. The Great Wall, the Summer Palace and Tian An Men Square are the most famous spots for sightseeing. We will experience Beijing’s culture and customs. I think the trip will be rewarding and enjoyable.

4 An E-mail to my friend who is going to visit Shanghai  Dear Tom:  I’m very glad to hear that you are going to visit Shanghai next week. Please tell me your flight number, arrival time and the airport by e-mail. I am going to meet you at the airport. During

your stay in Shanghai, I’ll show you around some places of interest such as the Bund, the Jinmao Building, Yu Garden and so on. In this way you can experience Chinese culture and customs. I am looking forward to your coming. Yours, Yu Bin Something I’d Most Like to Do  I’d most like to meet my net-pal Tom in Shanghai next week. He has told me his flight number, arrival time and the airport by email. I am going to receive him at the airport. During his stay in Shanghai, I’ll show him around some places of interest such as the Bund, the Jinmao Building, Yu Garden and so on. In this way he can experience Chinese culture and customs. I am looking 返回 forward to his coming.

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I’ve never given much thought to what kind of person I am, but I know I am a girl with a strong mind of making progress. It’s almost 10 years since I took up playing the piano. Once I wasn’t good at that, however, I thought since I was learning playing the piano, it was necessary for me to learn it well, as the saying goes, Life is like riding a bike, the best way to keep balance is to keep going. After a few weeks of hard practice, I was able to play the piano much better. I am so proud of myself for such great progress I made.

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篇七：2014中考作文_初三英语_英语_初中教育_教育专区_7500字

1、留守儿童 Nowadays, there are many left-behind children whose parents work away from their hometowns. Most of them are from the coutryside, you know, they have many problem. They are always lonely and stressed out because they are short of their parents' love. At the same time, they are easy to make mistakes even do some thing against the laws, because they're short of their families' care. How to solve their problems? In my eyes, the government can set up a parents school for these children on holidays, you can organize

First, you could eat less. The body needs food for energy, but you’ll become fat if you eat more than your body needs. If you eat less, the body can burn the calories and make you thinner. There are many ways to do exercise. For example, you could go to school on foot or by bike.

Don’t worry too much. I think you will become fit soon. 3、课外活动As we grow, both our after-school activities and what care about are becoming more and more. In the past, I often watched TV or played computer

games

at

home.

Sometimes I went out to play football with my friends. And I only cared about my own feeling and never cared about others.But now, I often have a communication with my parents, and let them know what I think and what I want to do. And now I am a volunteer. I often help people in need. I don’t think only about myself, but about others. This made me feel happy.We are growing up. We should think more about others, not only about ourselves. We should do some meaningful things.

4、低碳生活Low-carbon life is good for everyone. To help with the environment， I always walk or ride a bike to school instead of taking a car. Besides， I will try to use things that can be recycled and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom. I think it’s my duty to live a low-carbon life. And even the simplest activities can make a real difference to the environment. So I suggest we should reuse books as long as possible. And we’d better not spend much money on expensive clothes. If everyone does

something

for

the

environment， I believe the earth will be a better place.

5、中国梦 Everyone has his dream. My dream is to be a doctor. When I was in Grade seven, I was sick and often went to see doctors. The doctor were very friendly to me and they often cheered me up. With the help of them, I was getting better. Now I'm very healthy. Since then I have hoped to become a doctor. I will study hard to get more knowledge in order to achieve my dream. I'll give my love to the patients as much as possible and help them out of danger.To be a doctor is really great. I think my dream will come true one day. 6、怎样保证安全As teenagers, we should keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe? Here are some of my suggestions. First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially on line. Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. Also, we ought to eat healthily and safely. Eating food that goes bad will do harm to our health. Last but not least, summer is coming, and we must remember it’s dangerous to swim in the river. In short, safety must come first !

7、在考试之后怎样放松自己？ It is necessary to relax ourselves after the exam. There’re kinds of activities for us to take part in. First of all we can travel around to get closer to nature and this can broaden our mind as well as enriching our life. We can also go to the movie or listen to music. What’s more, joining in a sports club is a good choice, which can keep us healthy. For example, playing a

football game in the afternoon may relax ourselves. Above all, we should arrange our time reasonably and live a regular life.I hope all of us can have a wonderful time.

8、我的家乡——荆州My hometown is a beautiful place. It is an old city with a long history. For me, it’s not only the place I grew up, but also the place I love deeply all long. There are many places of interest and delicious food in my hometown. For example,the Jingzhou Museum is worth visiting.If you want to learn more about the Chu culture, Jingzhou is a good place for you. And you can also eat many kinds of special food. Besides, there weremany famous people in history, like Qu Yuan,Three Yuan and so on. This city isn’t too big, but the people here are very friendly. The weather here is pleasant and the scenery is beautiful, people live happily. Jingzhou is famous for its past history, but now it has developed a lot. It is becoming more modern and more charming. This is my lovely hometown, wherever I am, I will miss it all the time. 9、将告别母校，感恩之情。How time flies! We’re just leaving you—our lovely junior high school. I have so many words from my heart to say。Thanks, dear junior school. You’re a beautiful and happy home for us all. I hope you’ll be better and better. Thanks, dear teachers. You’re taught us lot of knowledge and helped us in all ways. I’ll

remember you forever. Thanks, our staff members. You’ve taken good care of us and helped us grow up. I hope you are happy all the time. Thanks, dear classmates. You’ve got on well with me just like sisters and brothers. Let’s always keep in touch with each other.10、节约用水As we all know, water is important to us all. People can’t live without water. Plants and animals will die if there is no water in the world. But there are still some people wasting water. For example, some students often forget to turn off the taps; some people take showers for a long time.Then what should we do to save water? First, we should turn off the taps after we use it. Second, we’d better recycle and reuse the water. Third, we should take a bath instead of having a shower.11老师Of all the subjects, I like Chinese best because I have a good Chinese teacher. Though she has been teaching us for only three years, I respect and love her very much.My Chinese teacher is thirty-six years old and she is neither tall nor short. Ms Sun works very hard. She is always the first to come and the last to leave her office. She tries to make her classes lively and interesting. And we enjoy her lessons very much. Ms Sun is very kind and friendly to us. And we＇re getting on well with each other. But she is very strict with us in our studies. Ms Sun teaches us so well that we all enjoy learning Chinese. All the

students think she is one of the most popular teachers in our school.12、学生考试作弊现象严重At present, a number of middle school students have picked up a bad habit - cheating in examinations. There are three main reasons. First, schools have given students too many exams, some of which are too difficult. Second, some students are not hard-working and they don't work hard at their lessons. Third, they waste a lot of time playing games or surfing the Internet. So

they haven't enough time to prepare for the exams. Finally, students have to do so to make their teachers and parents happy. In my opinion, cheating in exams does great harm to our study. We students should be honest and diligent, and only in this way can we improve our study and make progress.

13、中学生使用手机Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle schoolstudents. Some students think that it is easy to use them to keep in touch with parents and classmates.Also, they can be used to listen to music or take photos. But others think that we don’t need to talk with parents and classmates with mobile phones, because we meet them every day. And mobile phones may influence our study. In my opinion, it’s not wrong to follow the fashion, but the most important thingis how to use the mobile phone in a right way.

篇八：2010年初三英语中考作文参考_5000字

2010年初三英语中考作文参考

Write at least 60 words about the topic “I‟m proud of myself” (以“ 我为自己感到自豪” 为题写60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。

Use the following points as a reference （以下内容仅供参考）

What kind of person are you ?

What makes you proud of yourself ? (Give an example / examples)

Why are you proud of yourself ?

例卷参考

（A）The wheel of life has rolled fast through the past 15 years. By looking backwards, I „m so proud of myself because I‟ve grown into a strong-minded person. It was the first time for me to climb a high mountain alone. At first, I felt my body was filled with energy. As time went by, tiredness made my step slow down. For many times, the idea of giving up the journey appeared in my mind. But the saying “Accumulated water becomes a river “ enabled me to move on. Though the power of one step seemed so weak, I insisted on climbing to the top. When I succeeded, I felt I had reached a new height in my life. How proud I am being a strong –minded person. (17.5)

（Ｂ）I am a sunny boy filled with confidence and the joy of life. As a music lover, playing the piano makes me proud of myself. Every day, I often play the piano for a while to relax myself. Also my family members quite enjoy the wonderful melodies. I believe music is of great power. And playing the piano enables me to learn the joy of life. So I am proud of myself because I bring happiness to my family as well as myself by playing the piano. ( 17 )

（Ｃ）I am an optimistic person. There are many qualities I have that made me proud. For example, when my friend feels depressed, I always have a way of cheering him up. If I don‟t get good grades in a test, I do not give up. Instead, I work harder for the nest text.When I see the happy faces of the friends around me, I feel proudest of all. Because I know they feel happy because of me. Perhaps being just myself is the

true answer to why I am proud of myself. ( 16.5)

( D ) As far as I am concerned, there is always a kind of pride in my eyes ---helping others. When I think of it, happiness and confidence filled my heart. I am of the opinion that if you help someone who is in trouble, you‟ll be a successful person. Even if helping others is just a little thing, it can bring us a magical experience. Since I always do my best to help others, I‟m proud of myself when they say ”thank you “ to me. I am looking forward to helping others as often as possible. (16.5)

( E ) I am a humorous person. I always tell jokes to my classmates and my parents. When I see smiles on their faces, I am proud of myself. I also make my classmates fell better when they are in trouble. There is an old saying ”smile makes people younger “ and I bring happiness and smile to them and make them feel happy. So I am proud of myself. (15.5)

( F) I am very proud of myself. My family think I am a kind person. If somebody is in trouble, I will do him a favour with a smile. My kindness helps me to make good friends.Besides, I like drawing very much. My friends are fond of my paintings. They always say ”How beautiful it is!” My family and friends are proud of me. So am I. Because I gave much happiness to them. I will be proud of myself and make others happy forever. ( 15)

( G ) I think I‟m an honest person. I never tell lies to others. Once I was invited to a birthday party. But I soon forgot it. My friend was angry with me. I thought I should find an excuse. After seconds, I decided to tell the truth. To my surprise, she forgave me and said, “ you are a good person because of your honesty. “How proud I

was ! I made up my mind then. I will be an honest man forever. (14)

( H ) I am a kind helpful people. So I have many friends. Although I am overweight, I am good at running, playing basketball and so on. All my teachers who teached me tell me I am very bright but lazy. Last month I helped the policemen to take hold of the thelf. They were thankful to me and wanted to send me a flag. I told them I was learning from LeiFeng. They all smiled. In one word, I am proud of myself in all things.

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( I) I‟m proud of myself because I‟m shanghai people. Shanghai is one of the most attractive cities in the world. A lot of foreigners came to Shanghai to further their studies and live here. So I should also be kind to others. I should also keep the environment clean. As a member of Shanghainese, I will devote myself to making Shanghai a better place. I am very proud of myself. (10)

( J ) In my opinion, I am an honesty and kind boy. Because I‟m often try my best do everything . As we all know, we have only one earth. So when I do something what are protect green or water, I will proud of myself. There is a say ”Doing is better than saying. “And I often pick up the rubbish and put into the bin so that our earth will become more and more beautiful. ( 9 )

( K ) I am proud of myself. I am proud of myself is my careful. Because carefully is very important. Carefully can help us walk with the win. Carefully can make few mistake. When I in trouble, the carefully can help me solution it. In one word, do anything we must carefully. So, I can proud of myself is my carefully too. ( 7)

篇九：上海市初三英语中考考前作文辅导_4900字中考作文辅导

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什么是记叙文？ 记叙文是以叙述描写为主要手法、以记人叙事为主 要内容的。 写人

一般现在时

记叙文

叙事

一般过去时 一般现在时

景和物

写人常见的题目：

写 人 写 事

描 述

1. My Mother/ teacher/ Grandfather/ Friend… 2. My Favorite Teacher / Friend/ New Neighbour 3. Introducing Myself /Yourself… 1.What an Honest Student 2.My English Test 3. After the Entrance Exam (中考以后) 4. My …Birthday Party 5. A Day I’ll Never Forget / I Cannot forget the Day 1. My School 2. Great Changes in My Hometown …

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1. 叙述的人称

英语的记叙文一般是以第一或第三人称的角度来叙

述的。用第一称表示的是由叙述者亲眼所见、亲耳

所闻的经历。它的优点在于能把故事的情节通过这种方法也容易使文章显得平铺 直叙，读起来平淡乏味。倒叙、插叙、补叙等叙述 方法能有效地提高文章的结构效果，让所叙之事跌 宕起伏，使读者在阅读时思维产生较大的跳跃，从 而为文章所吸引，深入其中。但这些方法如果使用 不当，则容易弄巧成拙，使文章结构散乱，头绪不 清，让读者不知所云。

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过渡在上下文中起着承上启下、融会贯通的作用。 过渡往往用在地点转移或时间、事件转换以及由 概括说明到具体叙述时。 In my summer holidays, I did a lot of things. Apart form doing my homework, reading an English novel, watching TV and doing some housework, I went on a trip to Qingdao. It is really a beautiful city. There are many places of interest to see. But what impressed me most was the sunrise.

The next morning I got up early. I was very happy because it was a fine day. By the time I got to the beach, the clouds on the horizon were turning red. In a little while, a small part of the sun was gradually appearing. The sun was very red, not shining. It rose slowly. At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea, just like a deep-red ball. At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright. What a moving and unforgettable scene!

5. 叙述与对话

引用故事情节中主要人物的对话是记叙文提高表现 力的一种好方法。适当地用直接引语代替间接的主 观叙述，可以客观生动地反映人物的性格、品质和 心理状态，使记叙生动、有趣，使文章内容更加充 实、具体。试比较下面两段的叙述效果：

I was in the kitchen, and I was cooking something. Suddenly I heard a loud noise from the front. I thought maybe someone was knocking the door. I asked who it was but I heard no reply. After a while I saw my cat running across the parlor. I realized it was the cat. I felt released. 这本来应是一段故事性很强的文字，但经作者这么 一写，就不那么吸引人了。原因是文中用的都是叙 述模式，没有人物语言，把“悬念”给冲淡了。可作 如下调整：

I was in the kitchen cooking something. 得当

在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取 是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章 主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。要突出 重点，详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节， 略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而 使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记 叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。 如：

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写人为主的记叙文，需要侧重写人物的外貌特征、神态举止、 语言行为以及心现活动等。

My Grandma

Write at least 60 words about the topic “My Grandma”

1. What does your grandma look like? 2. Does she love you? 3. How does she take care of you? love best, take care of, a housewife, delicious food, be satisfied with, be proud of

My Grandma The one I love best is my grandma. The one who loves me best is also my grandma. In order to take good care of my, she moved to our house when I was born and has loved with us for more than ten years. My grandma used to be housewife. She has very little school education. But she can cook delicious food and she can make clothes herself. She is always satisfied with family members’ achievements and she hopes everyone in our family is healthy. She is also very proud of me. Whenever I make some progress, she is happier than me. I’m the apple of her eyes.

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Write at least 60 words about the topic “My Birthday Party”(以“我的生日聚会”为题，至少写60个单词的短文， 要求内容贴切，意思连贯)  When Use the following Points as a guide: Who took part in you party? What did you do at the party? How did you feel about your party?

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Great Changes in My Hometown

Write at least 60 words about what has happened and what will happen to your hometown. You can use the given words or phrases in the box.(写一篇不少于60字 短文，讲讲你家乡发生了什么变化和将要发管理发生 什么变化) used to be, great changes, take place, transport, study hard, more beautiful

Great Changes in My Hometown

In the past six years , Great changes have taken

place in my hometown. People in my hometown are living a happy life with the development of our country. Now many beautiful and tall buildings can be seen everywhere. Roads are getting wider and wider. People's living conditions

are getting better and better. What's more, many modern

schools have been built and children have got a good education. I feel very excited about the changes in my hometown . I think it is important to remember the past and dream about the future. I like my homet

own. I believe my hometown will become

more beautiful in the future!

Homework

Write at least 60 words about the topic “A Day I’ll Never Forget” according to the give situation.(根据所给 的情景，以“难忘的一天”为题，写一个至少60个单词 的段落，要求意思明确，内容连贯。)

Situation: You can still remember a day that is unforgettable in your life, for example: somebody gave you a greet help, you won the first prize in the test or had a great birthday…

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2010 年初三英语中考作文参考 Write at least 60 words about the topic “I’m proud of myself” (以“ 我为自己感到自 豪” 为题写 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。 Use the following points as a reference （以下内容仅供参考） What kind of person are you ? What makes you proud of yourself ? (Give an example / examples) Why are you proud of yourself ?

例卷参考 （A）The wheel of life has rolled fast through the past 15 years. By looking backwards, I ‘m so proud of myself because I’ve grown into a strong-minded person. It was the first time for me to climb a high mountain alone. At first, I felt my body was filled with energy. As time went by, tiredness made my step slow down. For many times, the idea of giving up the journey appeared in my mind. But the saying “Accumulated water becomes a river “ enabled me to move on. Though the power of one step seemed so weak, I insisted on climbing to the top. When I succeeded, I felt I had reached a new height in my life. How proud I am being a strong –minded person. (17.5)

（Ｂ）I am a sunny boy filled with confidence and the joy of life. As a music lover, playing the piano makes me proud of myself. Every day, I often play the piano for a while to relax myself. Also my family members quite enjoy the wonderful melodies. I believe music is of great power. And playing the piano enables me to learn the joy of life. So I am proud of myself because I bring happiness to my family as well as myself by playing the piano. ( 17 )

（Ｃ） am an optimistic person. There are many qualities I have that made me proud. I For example, when my friend feels depressed, I always have a way of cheering him up. If I don’t get good grades in a test, I do not give up. Instead, I work harder for the nest text. When I see the happy faces of the friends around me, I feel proudest of

all. Because I know they feel happy because of me. Perhaps being just myself is the

true answer to why I am proud of myself. ( 16.5)

( D ) As far as I am concerned, there is always a kind of pride in my eyes helping others. When I think of it, happiness and confidence filled my heart. I am of the opinion that if you help someone who is in trouble, you’ll be a successful person. Even if helping others is just a little thing, it can bring us a magical experience. Since I always do my best to help others, I’m proud of myself when they say ”thank you “ to me. I am looking forward to helping others as often as possible. (16.5)

( E ) I am a humorous person. I always tell jokes to my classmates and my parents. When I see smiles on their faces, I am proud of myself. I also make my classmates fell better when they are in trouble. There is an old saying ”smile makes people younger “ and I bring happiness and smile t

o them and make them feel happy. So I am proud of myself. (15.5)

( F) I am very proud of myself. My family think I am a kind person. If somebody is in trouble, I will do him a favour with a smile. My kindness helps me to make good friends. Besides, I like drawing very much. My friends are fond of my paintings. They always say ”How beautiful it is!” My family and friends are proud of me. So am I. Because I gave much happiness to them. I will be proud of myself and make others happy forever. ( 15)

( G ) I think I’m an honest person. I never tell lies to others. Once I was invited to a birthday party. But I soon forgot it. My friend was angry with me. I thought I should find an excuse. After seconds, I decided to tell the truth. To my surprise, she forgave me and said, “ you are a good person because of your honesty. “ How proud I

was ! I made up my mind then. I will be an honest man forever. (14)

( H ) I am a kind helpful people. So I have many friends. Although I am overweight, I am good at running, playing basketball and so on. All my teachers who teached me tell me I am very bright but lazy. Last month I helped the policemen to take hold of the thelf. They were thankful to me and wanted to send me a flag. I told them I was learning from LeiFeng. They all smiled. In one word, I am proud of myself in all things. (12)

( I) I’m proud of myself because I’m shanghai people. Shanghai is one of the most attractive cities in the world. A lot of foreigners came to Shanghai to further their studies and live here. So I should also be kind to others. I should also keep the environment clean. As a member of Shanghainese, I will devote myself to making Shanghai a better place. I am very proud of myself. (10)

( J ) In my opinion, I am an honesty and kind boy. Because I’m often try my best do everything . As we all know, we have only one earth. So when I do something what are protect green or water, I will proud of myself. There is a say ”Doing is better than saying. “ And I often pick up the rubbish and put into the bin so that our earth

will become more and more beautiful. ( 9 )

( K ) I am proud of myself. I am proud of myself is my careful. Because carefully is very important. Carefully can help us walk with the win. Carefully can make few mistake. When I in trouble, the carefully can help me solution it. In one word, do anything we must carefully. So, I can proud of myself is my carefully too. ( 7)

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